Minggu, 28 Oktober 2012

IELTS Writing


 1. Describing a Graph
In this IELTS writing section 1, there are some important things that we should know. That is about how to describing graph within containt in 6 (six) modles of graph. There are: Bar Graph, Line Graph, Pie Graph Chart, Table, Flow-Chart, Diagram. The function of each graph is to get information from some situation which is describe by the graph itself..
So, on this section it will be explained a graph forms TABLE, Table is a popular graph which is ussualy used for showing the information  in  a graph. In several cases there are some graphs that need a complement, but the special thing on table we can look information  clearly because on each collumn have a specific informtion.
The  List Of Stockholder 2012
Dinas Perikanan Dan Kelautan Boalemo
Number
NAME
M/W
Last
Graduate
STATUS
STARTED JOB
Position

CPNS
PNS
Position

1
Ir. Mans Mopangga
M
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Januari 1996
1 Januari 1997
Staf
Kepala Dinas


2
Ir. Asra Umar Murad
W
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 1998
1 Desember 1999
Staf
Sekretaris


3
Fanny Joudy Moray, S. Pi
W
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 1998
1 Desember 1999
Staf
Kabid. Kelautan


4
Firdaus Z Isa, SST
M
D4 Penyuluhan Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 1998
1 Desember 1999
Staf
Kabid. Bina Mutu


5
Moh. Rusly Badu, S. Pi
M
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 1998
1 Desember 1999
Staf
Kabid. Sarana & Produksi


6
Wisran Laudiu, S. Pi
M
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 2000
1 November 2002
Staf
Kasie. Usaha Penangkapan


7
Ir. Hasanudin Mopangga
M
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 2000
1 November 2002
Staf
Kasie. Pengelolaan KP3K


8
Ardiyansah Rauf, S. Pi
M
S1 Perikanan
Married
1 Desember 2000
1 November 2002
Staf
Kasubag. Penyusunan Program



9
Malfin Diyata, S.Kel
M
S1 Kelautan
Single
1 Desember 2000
1 November 2002
Staf
Kasie. Pengawasan, Perlindungan Laut & Konservasi


10
Nasrun Iyabu
M
SMU
Married
1 Desember 2000
1 November 2002
Staf
Staf



2. Describe Bar Graph On Video
The graph on this video described about ‘Internet Usage Demographies As a Percentage of Total Internet Usage in the UK’.
IELTS Writing Task 1 (Academic)- Written response from start to finish - YouTube.flv_snapshot_02.50_[2012.10.28_14.10.27].jpg
 In this graph we can see that young generation (15years old) increasing in every years. The significant of change has occurred on 1998 to 1999. Inversely, 16-30 years old has decreased each year that is approximately 8% in 1998-1999. As well as 16-30 years old, 31-49 decreased approximatly 2% per year. The last bar is about 50 years or more, the result of this bar show an increase on each year.
It will be two paraghraph, the paragraph 1 analyze 7 sentences, each sentence contains :
1.      Data type description, it is show about what the graps shows.
2.      Broad, it is show about the direction of the graph, upper or lower in the graph from 1998-2000.
3.      Minue detail, it show about the value in graph.
4.      Minue detail
5.      Minue detail
6.      Minue detail
7.      Conclusion
In paragrah 2, only has 3 sentences :
1.      Explanation
2.      Elaboration
3.      Summary, Prediction, Or Comments



 3. 150 words paragraph by using a graph
On this video the graph shows about how to identify information in a pie chart. The graph shows the export destination for Australiian and Newzealend goods. The main point on this graph, both of countries only 3 destination countries made up about three-quarters of the total goods. In Australia have top 3 destination, they are Japan, China, & Korea with total 71,2%. While, for New-Zealand the top 3 desinations were Australia, US & Japan with total 75,6%. The key point of this percentage is that the contry took the largest percentage of New-Zealand’s goods was Australia, it’s about 38,7%. However, New-Zealand was not one of the major export destination for Australia. The country that received the largest proportion of Australia’s goods in 2008, namely Japan. China & US have important destinations for both Australian and New-Zealand goods, giving the proportions and making clear comparison/contrast. Beside that, India was an important destination for Australia Conversely.

1 komentar: